Every Sentence`

by hollyxxmariee2011   May 1, 2007


When I close my eyes I see your face
Can tender sorrow break my heart
I hear your voice, me heart begins to race
Be true to me and we'll never fall apart
All your features are like a rose
Night is here so I must close
With care read the 1st word of each sentence
You will find the question of my mind

-Holly

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    This seems scattered, when reading it, it was like i was reading a line from this poem and a line from that, just all bunched together. I dont think this works well, try no metaphores, just truth..harder than it sounds, love your writtings though, you could be really great one day. Keep it up. -IBE

  • 17 years ago

    by hollyxxmariee2011

    Awsome

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