Good poem.
The emotion was shown and it flowed well.

'This cold blood on my hands
A massive loss for us and we grieve
Over this torn apart, broken land
You're still the one I believe'

Beautiful 5/5

[Sarah]

I really enjoyed this.
The opening really pulled me in and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
I adore the last stanza, particularly the last line, I thought that was very intense, it hit me hard and it was such a perfect way to wrap up.
The imagery you used created very vivid pictures and the word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable.

Ah gee, this again was another well writen poem. it had everything in it, love loss, well kinda..

5/5 David