Chelsey
What a beautiful poem full of hopes and dreams for love. Hope all your dreams come true :)

Because I want to be the first thing you see when you wake up and last before you sleep
Be the first person running over if I ever hear you weep
I don't want to even blink in another mans way
Because I trust you to never throw my love away

Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Excellent write!...so so perfect...lovely...Great!...filled wth passion
Perfecto...so deep..filled with hope n passion...excellent Job!
Cute=)
xxPoojaxx

Chels,
This is so beautiful. I searched long and hard on the featured writers poems because I want them to know I read the poem.
Virginity is not just physical but mental as well and you paint that beautifully in this poem. You wouldn't even want to blink another man's way. That is love in the purest of forms. I have chosen this exquisite write as one of your best. Although I have not read all of them I felt like this was a message that needs to be sent to young adults today. So many of us passed the oppurtunity to "save ourselves" and it needs to be taught. Wonderful write dear.