Chelsey
This is written just like a modern day fairy tale. Excellent job! Hope everything works out for you :)

When you read it all I hope you come running down the street
Knock on my door and swoop me off my feet
From then on out, because of my innocent move
I hope the rest of your life, I'm the only girl you choose

Love your ending.
Take Care Cindy

Awww!!!!!!1.......it's a sweeet romantic poem!!1.....Great wrk!.....loved it!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Great poem with strong emotions. Really enjoyable!

Wow! This is a really good poem, you are really talented! Evertime I read one of your poems it amazes me how you put everything together. Great poem another one added to my faves list.