Our Song

by Startle Me   May 1, 2007


True love, I never did understand
That was until our song was heard
Harmonious it was to critic's ears
Never knew what this being preferred

You are in my heart, it went
My loving one and only heart
A glimpse of your smiling face
I would tear the world apart

You are in my smile, my dear
In my each and every smile
Beguiled I was by your beauty
Your personality and your style

Will you kiss me for tonight?
Just a single kiss on the lips?
You are my sun, I am your moon
Are you ready for an eclipse?

Will you love me until tomorrow?
I hope this night would never end
Just as long as you are by my side
I will let you love me as a friend

This tune it went in my heart
It was melodic, lyrical, so strong
Your heart I will capture, one day
On that day, this will be our song

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  • 16 years ago

    by GrapeliciousKoolAid

    You are my sun, I am your moon
    Are you ready for an eclipse?
    ......
    that is my fav. part! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This one is sooooo awsome GREAT JOB 100/100

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    I really like this poem it is one of my favorites!!!!!! :))

    love ashley!!:))

  • 17 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Awesome poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I love the strong vocabulary you had in this poem. It flowed very well, and there isn't much critiquing I could do, since this poem was excellent. :)

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