by just me May 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
We lie on this blanket, |
by malina
All i can say is wow...so deep and one of the most beautiful poem i have ever read... |
by rina
I really like this piece...especially the very last stanza |
by Chris
Another great poem. i like how you intertwined a kind of "nature" concept into the poem w/o actually making the poem about nature. i love the final two lines! |
by Elyse
Aww sweet love it that was really nice |
I really enjoyed this poem,nice flow, great wording ,long but good very beautiful poem, keep up the great work,,, your friend Tracy~~~~5/5 |