How are you so good at writing love poems? most of mine are...well not even close to this good...dare i say i love it? well i do..its beautiful... |
by Melly
Very cute. i really enjoyed it. |
Hey!.very cute poem.loved it...kp writing...it's just beautiful.......tk care! |
I really like this one. |
by Janet
Very good job! Keep it up |
by Alyssa Marie
Wow, i love how deep it is. beautiful. |
by here with u
Another really great one, this would have to be my fave 1 of yours, all the words just fit so perfectly and u can picture it so well in ur mind! |
I really enjoyed this poem,nice flow, great wording ,long but good very beautiful poem, keep up the great work,,, your friend Tracy~~~~5/5 |
by Elyse
Aww sweet love it that was really nice |
by Chris
Another great poem. i like how you intertwined a kind of "nature" concept into the poem w/o actually making the poem about nature. i love the final two lines! |
by rina
I really like this piece...especially the very last stanza |
by malina
All i can say is wow...so deep and one of the most beautiful poem i have ever read... |