by BeautifulxMess May 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Kiss me with you soft undying lips I long to endure. |
The last line was my favorite out of all of them. It was such a sweet poem. Full of innocence, and grace. The word choices were amazing. I really liked the strong sence of love and passion in this cause its so true how a little kiss can hold sooo much more. Nice work. |
by Amanda
Really good poem |
by puregoddess
This poem was beautiful. |
I love this poem......great job......keep on writting and you shoudl check out some of my poems.......thankx.....and 5/5..... |
by carissalynn
Wow, this was so adorable [[= haha cute |