Well written once again the vocab is greatm but maybe a little too showoffish idk could just be me, maybe I am not used to that. anyway the emtion was strong, and the flow was great, and the message was clear. 5/5

I agree with this one... i wonder myself... i know that i always keep them in a box up in my closet that i take down every once in a while to remember and restock... great job in this one. once again you have a unique way of writing and i like it. and thank you again for the comment. :)