Aww. So sad, but very well peened.
I found a couple of errors, and the
flow was a bit shaky. Very well done
though. God Bless 5/5
<3Tay ^__^

This 1 is like very cold...well penned..though i found a few grammar mistakes u've written well...Good work!..kp it up!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Wow that was a good poem nice job, i could feel your voice in it. I like the cold though. 5/5

I think the repititon of the first stanza as the last gave this a circular, dealt with feel. it seemed resolved. the imagery throughout was amazing and the use of snow was really clever.