Pot of Gold

by Infected with His Deadly Love   May 1, 2007


One day at a time
Don't go too fast
You only live once
And it wont last

So slow down
There's time for all
Live life to the fullest
And never fall

Don't think of the bad
Don't think of the negatives
They wont get you anywhere
Only think of the positives

If you keep doing this
Do as you're told
For at the end of the rainbow
There is a pot of gold

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Nice. It was very inspirational and had a good overall message to it. I liked how you tied the ending into it, that was a good ending. Keep it up Hunn.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Don't think of the bad
    Don't think of the negatives
    They wont get you anywhere
    Only think of the positives"

    Short, simple and a helluva lot of depth =)
    I loved this one! It was so upbeat and happy
    And a lot of people on this site could do with reading it and taking heed of it's message!
    5/5 m'dear
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by freedom

    I really like this poem i love how u worded it and every thing but i think if you make it alittle longer it will make it great...5/5

    Tiffany

  • 17 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Inspiring stuff, i like the message of this poem. and the message is conveyed all the better by the way it is written. A true commentary on life live each day as if its your last

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I loved it...a beautiful inspiring peice of work...loved the way u've penned it!
    kp writing!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

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