Well, first off I would like to say this is a very wonderful and inspirational poem. Second, you should keep your lines in each stanza the same amount of syllables as possible.(That goes for the same lenth of each stanzas the same) It flows better that way, and it's easier to follow.

Overall, you did a very good job with this poem. It was well penned. The flow was shaky but it didn't interfere with your poem's messege. Well done! God Bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^

I really liked this one. Because it had a nice flow to it and rhymed in a few places. Also I totaly believe the message. 5/5

I really like this cuas eits basically the philosophy on life that i have... its not often people acctually think this way of like though this is really cool

nicley written!

Postive ,and upbeat. Ilike that it is refreshing from all of the poems I usally read. You did an excellent job. Great flow well penned. 5/5

I think it was good.
I didn't think it was great, though.
You could've elaborated on it a bit more.
Other than that.
On the first stanza, second line
I think you mispelled "to"
Do you mean "too"
??
But still.
Great writing skills
5/5?

Well, I caught on to the..

Something non rhyming,
Rhyming,
Something non rhyming,
Rhyming.

thing. I hope you meant to do that, just because, but FYI. I loooooove this poem, it needs a tad bit flow to it.

I loved it...a beautiful inspiring peice of work...loved the way u've penned it!
kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Inspiring stuff, i like the message of this poem. and the message is conveyed all the better by the way it is written. A true commentary on life live each day as if its your last

I really like this poem i love how u worded it and every thing but i think if you make it alittle longer it will make it great...5/5

Tiffany

"Don't think of the bad
Don't think of the negatives
They wont get you anywhere
Only think of the positives"

Short, simple and a helluva lot of depth =)
I loved this one! It was so upbeat and happy
And a lot of people on this site could do with reading it and taking heed of it's message!
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

Nice. It was very inspirational and had a good overall message to it. I liked how you tied the ending into it, that was a good ending. Keep it up Hunn.