"We'll seek the stars and so much more with pleasure in our hands."

I adored that line. Your really great at writing, i belive i told you that before. This poem was very written and was a love poem, but it was so unbearably sappy. Great job on this one

Wow.
This is beautiful.
I was wondering...
Where do you learn all these
Formats of poetry?
You're pretty good, I have to admit.
I think you belong in like
The olden age.
Along with Mark Twain and Shakespeare.
You guys just sound so smart.
Lol.
I hope you take that as a compliment.
Other than that.
5/5?

I like this poem, and I like your irony amongst the romamce, like the fact that love cant be planned and is the death of the individual.
Very deep thinking - I like poetry that makes me think.
Well done, nicely written and full of emotion x

Now this poem, has it all depth, strong emtions, amazing flow, well penned. I absoultly loved it, and the meaning behind it. You are truly talented, so please keep writting, so i can keep reading 5/5