I LOVED this. You haven't written in awhile, or else I just never noticed haha, but I really thought this was worth the wait. ^_^ You get better with every write Darling, you truly are very talented, never stop. As I was reading this I was like, wow, this is inspirational! And then I realized, the page was blue...lmao..is there a point to that comment? You may ask.. why yes there is..I was so taken in by your words that I never even notcied the things surrounding the page, I didn't get distracted..and that's hard for a person like me, bahaha.

Heartchuu. 5.5

Darn it, forgot to say..

"Inevitable
Is the beauty within life
Which is spread throughout
Earth; let not the flowers
Run Wild of which you built."

^^ Turly amazing lines, they show the capacity of your abilities of a writer. =)

Again, your work amazes me, and you got talent, i would have to say that you are one of my favourite writers on here, great job :)

This is, once again, beautiful.
Although...
God you're the Ruler
Would sound a whole lot better
If you turn it into
God you are the Ruler
It just sounds different.
I think it sounds better.
I don't know, you might think differently.
But other than that
5/5?

I absolutely loved this poem.
"Inevitable
Is the beauty within life
Which is spread throughout
Earth; let not the flowers
Run Wild of which you built."
^ I loved those lines, they were beautiful!

The last stanza, I loved it as well as the second, but I wish it could have said you are God, instead. :/ But, oh well. It sounded great how it was. I really liked the last two lines, too.

GoodGolly. What am I say, I loved it all. Lol. It was an amazing write. :D
Keep it up, hun.

Excellent poem with great flow n u have beautifully adhered to the rule. Thats ur talent n creativity. Great just 5/5 frm my v heart.
plx read my etheree

With love
Fsams

That poem was lovely and well writen. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

RavEy