Turning Back Time

by LithiumSacrifice   May 2, 2007


Turning Back Time

Only an angel has the wings to fall
Only a star has the light to die
Where you can save it all
With the eyes to hold the sky

Only a heart has the love to break
Only the sun has the warmth to grow cold
Who would ever known life was a fake?
Who would have thought this story has been told?

Only the pen has the ink to run out
Only a candle has the wax to melt
Why would life just turn around?
To feel this pain again, which I have felt

If a scar were to reopen
To show the aching hole
Then I'll drop to my knees hoping
You're not coming back for the heart you already stole

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Whoa, now this poem is the best i have read some far today. it was simply perfect.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was beautifully written...emotion and depth shine through the words. The imagery you used creates vivid pictures, and I liked the metaphors you used.
    Flow was flawless throughout, and the rhyme scheme and word choice enjoyable, as was the whole poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    Good job, so deep.

    --Sophia

  • 17 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Yeah i dont know what to say... you blew me away with this one. Seriously awesome . Yup thats going in my favourite poems blew me away haha im so lost for words. AWESOME lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxShadowxx

    I like it. It's very good.

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