I like it. It's very good.

Yeah i dont know what to say... you blew me away with this one. Seriously awesome . Yup thats going in my favourite poems blew me away haha im so lost for words. AWESOME lol 5/5

Good job, so deep.

--Sophia

Ohhh this was beautifully written...emotion and depth shine through the words. The imagery you used creates vivid pictures, and I liked the metaphors you used.
Flow was flawless throughout, and the rhyme scheme and word choice enjoyable, as was the whole poem.

Whoa, now this poem is the best i have read some far today. it was simply perfect.

5/5 David