I am Fade

by Vyntrrose   May 2, 2007


I'm that girl that no one sees
no one cares, I'm on my knees
I only speak when spoken to
and even then, my words are few
I cry at night when no one's there
I write the poems I never share
the latticework of angry scars
my pale inner arm it mars
just give an order, I'll see its done
I'll do what you want, you've already won
the color of my soul is red
like blood that spills upon my bed
scarlet hues, crimson stain
evidence of forever pain
mistakes that I did once commit
that candle cannot be re-lit
I'll be alone, no love or friends
I'm your servant until the end

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  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Wow, this is amazing. The rhyme sceme is hidden well, i didnt even recognize it until half way through. (That's a good thing because it is far from sounding forced). I love the backing into the topic, its one of my fave poems ive seen on this site in a while, and im not even just saying that.

    {5/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I loved the poem. I thought the rhyming was really good to start, it got a little shaking in the middle, but was good again by the end. Maybe try putting it into stanzas. It might be easier to read that way. I thought it was an awesome poem.