Wow. this is a very full of emotion.. very well written!! keep up the good work! 5/5 |
by The Mr Simon
Hey Vanessa, |
You're quite the dark child aren't you? This is the second poem I've read by you, and they're quite simular, in more ways that one. Anyway, my favorite lines were; |
Wow, I must say I loved that poem. Though all this stuff is probably what you're going through right now, I don't know if my nice comment will make you feel any better. I sure hope it does, because you shouldn't feel this way. Believe me, no matter how bad life gets, you can't give up. About the poem, 5/5 hands down. |
by omgitsmina
^ What he said. |
Excellent write full of emotion yet very deep.very well done,been there and done that, great job. |
I've noticed you love to rhyme which is great, but perhaps you should try new styles and mix it up a bit. |
by CY GINDLE
You have a way of putting things that i love |
The second I saw the title, I was intrigued. The poem didn't let me down, either. I can definitely relate to this poem... The first three lines are especially influential. 5/5. |
Cha! |