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I really like your poem it very good...it has good rhyme!....i like it alot because i believe the same thing that we need help not just lay around!! so good job!...surprised no one has commented on it yet great job....thanks for your comment i really appreciate it ...keep writing!

Awesome work, love it, love the meaning the emotional and its jst great really. Nice work, keep it up. Check me out. : )