by Jenni Marie
I frikken LOVE this! |
A very, very good piece. The structure and flow was flawless. The rhymes were perfect, and the words were wonderfully creative, which painted, not only a wonderful scene, but also a terrific story . All in all, a well written poem. I hope your others are just as good, or dare I say, perhaps even better. My favorite stanza has to be the closing one. In my novice opinion, I think that the first and last stanzas should always be the best. |
by Cindy
Gem |
by Marcus
I love it honey! |
by Molly
Love this poem! 5/5 for me. Good rhyming. Keep up the good work! |
by carissalynn
Whoo, i would hate to be near that wolf, once again, you know what i am going to say [[= |
by Wallace
This is excellent, you really outdid yourself, this is another reminder why you are on my fav's list, excellent work, keep it up. |
by steffff
Whoah. i LOVE it. flows really well and the rhyming is so natural. keep up the good work! |
by Debbie
This is really delightful to read. An eerie sense of ambiguity stirrs throughout this piece in a way which made me long to learn more about it. As always, I'm enchanted. This piece is simply wonderful. Thanks for sharing hun! Love, Debbie |
by MelindaJoy
Very nice imagintaion I loved the rhyme sheme you did very good on this peice |
by Robert
This flowed very well and the Rhythm sheme was done quite well hats off, I been gone for a long while but maybe I should come back take care and hope to see you around plot121 |
That was scary indeed, the way u started it...wow...did u watched any wolf movie to get this inspiration...?? |
by Soft Parade
Nicely written, everythi |
by Roxy
Oh, what an amazing poem...I love the description of how the wolf reacts!! |
Wow Gem. Very.... dark. lol. I really liked how you portrayed this poem. 5/5 |
I love love love this poem. |
by Kelly
Gem |
Excellent poem. Such perfect flow... Great job!!! 5/5 |
by Jordan W
Beautiful poem |
Hi I know you don't Know me but I would like to aske you if it would be okay to use your poem She Wolf in a card to my love. The reason I'm askeing is because my baby or feonce realy loved it ond he is curantly in another state. |