Silver and beautiful
yet looks better dressed in red
absently these sick thoughts
drift through my head

Those 4 lines were so strong and really hooked me into the piece from the start. I found this to be an intense thrilling read. A powerfully written poem with an amazing flow. Well done on writing such a great piece of poetry. Keep up the good work~mel

Very beautiful poem with nice words and flow. Keep it up. tc

Silver and beautiful
yet looks better dressed in red

^^ Those two lines were what captured me from the beginning. The rest didn't really live up to them in my opinion. I almost wish you'd have not said anything about cutting or blades, and just continue suggestions like you have in these first two lines. Just give the reader images and trust them to put it together.
It was brilliant though.
4/5.