My heart

by why is life so miserable   May 2, 2007


My heart screams out for help!
Each peace represents all the pain i felt for you,
all the tears i cried for you,
all the crisis i did to be with you,
all the people i push way for you,
just to see u walk away with nothing to say
to see that everything i believed on has vanish in a split of a second
to see your your eyes look away knowing that that look that once was mine has slightly lost its touch and faded away,for no reason, not telling me what i did wrong
you destroy my world, u step on my heart like it was nothing and crush until u left it into little peaces and you didn't cared if you destroyed the meaning of love and for that i hope you know that the pain I'm do to myself is gonna leave new hurtful scars.Scars that will stay forever and never disappear

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  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is great i love it kinda hard to follow in some places but it is still awesome great job and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The first line, you need to add a e to scream. you left it out. but only small mistake. this was a great and very enjoyable poem. yet the sadness was full on and evident...

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda S

    I votee 5 :)
    loves it <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I like your style.

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