Show me how

by steel99   May 2, 2007


I am clothed in fear still it seems
All my trust bares a wound
Your nourishment and affection
Curing aches and pains soon
Unsure of wants, But I need it.
Notice my smiles, still depleted
.... Unsure of wants.
.... Unsure of wants.
My cry, only you can greet it

I am clothed in fear still it seems
I've cherished everything
My entire life was screened
Rule this territory, my king
Exploit my being, detail each rule
Be my mine digger, I'm your jewel
....exploit my being.
....exploit my being.
Manage this job using your tools

I am clothed in fear still it seems
Maturity I cry
Like a desert in need of rain
Please this body of mine
My fear is eased, you brought truth
My life was rough, you made it smooth
....My fear is eased
....My fear is eased.
My fear is removed; thanks to you

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I wonder how you go from not even knowing you could write to writing something like THIS. Listen here paquasay...you have something here! I mean really! Something fantastic!! I am so proud!! He's a poet and didn't know it! HAHAHAHAHA

    This poem is beautiful. I love how you write things that most of would never think of...you put it together so gracefully and it makes perfect sense. BEAUTIFUL SENSE! I'm impressed that you completed this piece because after reading the rules last night I change my mind about trying...HAHAHA It was a difficult one. Though by reading it...it doesn't read as though you struggled. It reads like you just wrote it...without a single thought. Beautiful Craig!!! you should definitely be proud of this one.

    I don't know if I'm reading tonight....but I'm definitely amped to go!! :) I hope you're enjoying your day!

More Poems By steel99