Great Job... could use a touch of work but not much. I like it and i like how you wrote about Love and Loss in the same poem.

I'm not a huge fan of sad love poems but it's pretty good.... although I write alot of them myself...its kinda hard not to write about love sad or not but yeah overall good write :) the lines flowed pretty good together

I certainly liked this poem better than the last one, and I think the reason I didn't like your other poem as much was because it was a love poem, and I find it rather hard to respect/like them. Anyway, this poem flowed nicely and I think it was this poem's greatest asset. My favorite stanza was the third one, particularly because of the rhyme.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'Rescue Us', and I'm glad you liked it.

P.P.S. I'm glad you don't mind the truth, it just makes it a more comfortable relationship between us.