That was quite good. The flow was great and the rhymes were not forced. I loved the imagery and the concept and content it has. Definitely something worth reading. Nice job.
~Faith-less

Nice imagery. This peice was amamzing, the emtions deep, and the message rang very true. Nice flow well pinned excellent write 5/5

I like the message of this poem its truly powerful.. and this has a great dedication to some readers. nice expressing ur words 5/5

Thats sad. Great poem.. nice word choice also.. keep up the good work.. 5/5

I really liked this one as well.
Great topic to bring up, one I rarely see around.. especially written as poetry.
you did an amazing job, once again hun.
but, I don't like how there was no capitalization or puncutaion [sp].

Keep it up.
teria.

The message in your poem was strong, and it came out and softly tapped me on the nose... a nice way of saying that it slapped me in the face.. (thats a good thing!!) so yeah. you have a talent for communicating with an audience!!!

Very moving and heartfelt, the message was strong, and you have a way to put everything into a different perspective

Lovely write....and the message portrayed in this 1 is strong...and u r very able in communicating such powerful messages thru' your work....well expressed!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Wow this was beautiful.. Very different from what I thought I was going to be reading. Such a very creative topic, you showed great passion in this and I can just tell that its something you feel strongly about. And I agree with you. With everything we are doing not only are we going to be hurting ourselves but we are going to be hurting the plants and animals as well, and unlike us they didnt do anything to deserve it. The last line was magnificant.. Very simple yet very powerful. 5.5

Wow this was beautiful.. Very different from what I thought I was going to be reading. Such a very creative topic, you showed great passion in this and I can just tell that its something you feel strongly about. And I agree with you. With everything we are doing not only are we going to be hurting ourselves but we are going to be hurting the plants and animals as well, and unlike us they didnt do anything to deserve it. The last line was magnificant.. Very simple yet very powerful. 5.5

Awwwww. i loved they way and the idea you have put in your this poem great great work 5/5

Wow, i never thought of this. it was a great idea and i love the way you expressed it, nice work