by just a little girl May 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Soft screams from a young teen who doesn't have the strength to be heard. |
by omgitsmina
I love the conceptual message behind the poem, my only suggestion would be that you could use some better vocabulary and diction. Good overall. 4/5 |
by Vanessa
I loved the underlining emtion in this poem. It is well wriiten, and well pinned. You did a good job. keep writting, and i will keep reading. 4/5 |