Touched me deeply.. show me the cuts on your wrists had me nearly breaking down. really. brilliant-

Whoa...that was very deep...short and sweet and deep...the charicteristics (for some reason, that word "charicteristics" doesnt look spelled right....) for a perfect poem! 5/5

Oh!!..wow!!..great work...soo touching and filled with meanings.i soo loved this work...u've put in deep emotions into it..kp it up!another 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

This is such a good poem, but i feel that it could be batter because the way you write, it seems as though you can write more then that...it seems to me that you can write a whole novel of poetry and it would be great, dont hold back! 5/5