A new love

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   May 2, 2007


A new beginning for my heart,
at last i feel the warmth,
the sweetness of your love,
so gentle like a dove,
you heal my heart with your embrace,
this is going to be a beautiful romance,
stay by my side and don't make me hurt,
it's like a game being played in half court,
if we make it to half time,
then we can move on and you'll be mine.

this is the life that is about to start.
you and i would never be apart,
you fill in the wholes in my heart,
with that sweetness and gentle touch.
the journey start here and goes on.
together we walk the path
together forever we hold on
to be by your side was my dream
the dream that seemed faraway from my reach
you bring warm to my soul
and a feeling to my being i can't describe.
i love you my love forever be mine!

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  • 17 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Well, thats was so wonderful you express your poem so nice and it shows that you real feel what you are writing "to be by your side was my dream, the dream that seems far away to be reach'' ooh! i like that line a mostly and ''if we can make its to the half time, thn we can mave on and you'll mine'' i love tat too, you poem is real nice, i hope its will go your plan on your ralationship. Keep it on

  • 17 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Good job needs a bit more phizazz so that we the readers can feel how you feel but other than that you are a really good writer keep it up:)

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This is pretty good its just tht i couldnt reall feel the emotion there...see ur not bad!! its pretty good..kk =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nevi

    I love you too baby! this is so beautiful, of course i'll be yours!

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