I love you too baby! this is so beautiful, of course i'll be yours!

This is pretty good its just tht i couldnt reall feel the emotion there...see ur not bad!! its pretty good..kk =)

Good job needs a bit more phizazz so that we the readers can feel how you feel but other than that you are a really good writer keep it up:)

Well, thats was so wonderful you express your poem so nice and it shows that you real feel what you are writing "to be by your side was my dream, the dream that seems far away to be reach'' ooh! i like that line a mostly and ''if we can make its to the half time, thn we can mave on and you'll mine'' i love tat too, you poem is real nice, i hope its will go your plan on your ralationship. Keep it on