Last Tears

by Sandra D   May 2, 2007


These are the last tears
I'll ever cry for you.
No matter how you treat me,
No matter what you do.

There'll be none left
After tonight.
None to hold back,
No more to fight.

They'll all fall down,
One by one.
Just this last time,
Til there's none.

This is it,
The last of my sorrow.
Only one thing's for sure,
I won't cry tomorrow.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Great poem

    ps sorry if my comments are getting shorter it is just that you gave me alot of poems to look at:~)Sam

    PSS.Keep ^ the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is it,
    The last of my sorrow.
    Only one thing's for sure,
    I won't cry tomorrow.

    Wow this stanza is very cute and catching. Loved the structure and how you have made all the way coherent and cohesive.

    Keep it up
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was simple, short, yet still touched my heart, it was sad, yet you just have a way with your words. it was an amazingly written piece, nothing i can say to this would make it any better. loved it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Such a simple piece of poetry which was effective and so strong. I loved the emotions you portrayed into this piece, they were dark yet sad mixed together to for this strong poem. The flow was spot on definitly a good read.~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    First stanza?
    Simple and perfect.

    Second?
    Gawd, you're good. :P

    Til there's none.
    That would sound better if you say
    'Til there is none

    Only one thing's for sure,
    Change that.
    It just doesn't flow that well..

    All in all?
    I loved it.
    I rarely say that to poems :P
    Be proud of yourself, dear.

    5.5

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