This Pain
by gasping for air May 2, 2007
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My heart aches.... |
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17 years ago
You should read my poem that has the same title....this one is really good tho.....what madeyou write this?
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17 years ago
by Stephanie
Wonderful!!!
So short, yet very powerful... I could feel the pain radiating off every word. The flow was flawless & your word usage was great.... Simply fabulous job! Keep writing! 5.5 =]
Stephanie Lynn .+. -
17 years ago
Well done! Emotional yet enjoyable... short but sweet, can be some of the most potent kind of poems!
Thank you.
blush -
17 years ago
Short, but to the point. The rhyming was good. I liked the poem.
