Short, but to the point. The rhyming was good. I liked the poem.

Well done! Emotional yet enjoyable... short but sweet, can be some of the most potent kind of poems!

Thank you.

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Wonderful!!!
So short, yet very powerful... I could feel the pain radiating off every word. The flow was flawless & your word usage was great.... Simply fabulous job! Keep writing! 5.5 =]

Stephanie Lynn .+.

You should read my poem that has the same title....this one is really good tho.....what madeyou write this?