by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex May 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This is about a girl committing suicide and someone standing over her talking to her and telling her to [insert last line of poem here.] |
by skynerraw
Great poem, nice meaning, the flow was great, I really liked the last stanza, but the rest was just as good :D I think this was my favorite out of the one's I've read so far, but I'm still reading more so :P 5/5 |
by Greg Beam
Very great. nice rhyme pattern. great flow and word usage. very easy to read. nice meaning. keep up the great writing! |