Vocadin with a Shot of Clarity {Terzanelle}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 2, 2007


Push down your throat some clarity,
With little happiness to go;
Push down your throat some clarity.

Dance idiot, dance, for a show;
You'll think twice before you think
With little happiness to go.

At the handsome men you'll blink,
With stupidity a shot;
You'll think twice before you think.

You will think like a robot;
Alarm tells you something's wrong
With a stupidity shot.

You know you are far from strong,
In this world of make believe;
Alarm tells you something's wrong.

You will take a step to deceive;
Push down your throat some clarity.
In this world of make-believe,
Push down your throat some clarity.

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1. A
2. B
3. A

4. b
5. C
6. B

7. c
8. D
9. C

10. d
11. E
12. D

13. e
14. F
15. E

16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hm.. I'm not sure if I liked this poem as much as I liked the others. But I liked the message that it was sending, I'm not sure if its what you were trying to send but what I got was if you think clearley then you won't have to become someones puppet and dance for show, so to use your head before its to late.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I have to admit that I liked the style. The word choice was good, and the flow was great. I expecially like the reption of certian lines from one staza to the next. again brillantly done. You have alot of courage to try new kinds of poetry like that.5/5