I have to admit that I liked the style. The word choice was good, and the flow was great. I expecially like the reption of certian lines from one staza to the next. again brillantly done. You have alot of courage to try new kinds of poetry like that.5/5

Hm.. I'm not sure if I liked this poem as much as I liked the others. But I liked the message that it was sending, I'm not sure if its what you were trying to send but what I got was if you think clearley then you won't have to become someones puppet and dance for show, so to use your head before its to late.