Comments : Worth Leaving

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Nice! 5/5 duno why but i liked this:
    Be hushed, you sleep alone tonight
    Before I leave I bid good-night.
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey!...Beautiful...i liked it a lot!...it's just Great Work!....kp it up!
    Tk care
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Sarah, this was such a beautiful piece! I loved the wording of this poem, it was so very tense. There was this, calm before the storm type of mood that made this poem enjoyable. I also loved the last verse, it ended the poem so perfectly. Good job on this one Sarah!