So this is Love

by Sara   May 2, 2007


I'm so tired of waiting
for you to finally realize
That I am no longer debating
What I see when I look into your eyes

You put a smile on my face
It extends from ear to ear
You know when to give me space
But still you always remain near

We have been apart for long
I've noticed how much I need you
I think of you when I hear slow songs
I really don't know what to do

We had ours ups and downs
There were good days and bad
But still you never made me frown
Those were the best times I've ever had

I've been thinking about you a lot
How is life without me?
Do you care or not?
Why can't we live happily?

I know this time what it is
I've been soaring above
I really want to be his
So this is love

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nicely written piece of poetry. I can relate as I'm sure many others can as well. I liked your wording and the imagery within this poem. I however, felt that you could of had some puncuation within this poem, it would help with the flow and let the readers know when to pause or stop reading for a moment. Overall it was a well thought out poem which has emotions in which many can relate, well done keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    I know exactly what that feels like to love and not be loved. 5/5 perfect display of emotions. I'm sorry that not everyone can see perfection before their eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Aww that was so sweet. Well done, lovely poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Cute poem
    5/5 saraaaaaa

  • 16 years ago

    by PreciousGem

    It Was AWESOME.. It's Similar To My One Is This It .. But You HAve Managed To Capture Somthing Totally Different And Amazing..

    Well Done Gurliie.. :P

    xx

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