by 19Rusty
All I can say is...Word. |
*,,Awww! That is too cute, i used to relate to that. You picked a good title for this...the poem has a great flow to it && the rhyming was great also. |
by AJ
This is beautiful and i give it an easy 5, dont stop writing |
by Mezmeryz
Aww, tha was so sweet! =] i can se the love and emotion, and then at the ending, the confusion, its touching, deep and beautifully written, about a beautiful subject..love =] |
Awesome poem, a job well done, and a feeling done justice. |
It's really hard to get over love and it really never gets any easier. I enjoyed your poem, I thought it was very heartfelt and it flowed very well. Excellent job 5/5 GG23 |
by Tiller
Amazing. Beautiful. You've managed to make me think of the past. That's quite hard to do. That's bad for me not you lol. Wonderful poem. I think you are a wonderful writer. DO NOT STOP OR I WILL HURT YOU =D Thank you. lol Keep writing. |
by Bre Monique
I love it so much ~ It's so pretty ~ My favorite part was the last line ~ |
by lover girl
Wow i love your poem it remeind me so much or my ex and i |
Wow. this poem really got to me. this is exactly how i feel about my ex. he still loves me but the distance killed our relationship.. we lost contact for w few months now but im sendin him a letter in the morning. i jus wanted to let u know that this poem is making me want to get back in touch with my first true love.. amazing poem!! |
by Pamela G
I can't stop smiling while I'm reading this poem. It's makes me thought about my younger day. Very sweet. |
by Randy Lee
This was fun to read. Keep em comin |
by PreciousGem
It Was AWESOME.. It's Similar To My One Is This It .. But You HAve Managed To Capture Somthing Totally Different And Amazing.. |
Cute poem |
by Nawa
Aww that was so sweet. Well done, lovely poem. |
I know exactly what that feels like to love and not be loved. 5/5 perfect display of emotions. I'm sorry that not everyone can see perfection before their eyes |
Nicely written piece of poetry. I can relate as I'm sure many others can as well. I liked your wording and the imagery within this poem. I however, felt that you could of had some puncuation within this poem, it would help with the flow and let the readers know when to pause or stop reading for a moment. Overall it was a well thought out poem which has emotions in which many can relate, well done keep up the great work. |