No, Unfortunately

by PygmyPuff   May 2, 2007


Straight up.
Don't back off.
Live strong.
Rules to live by.
Don't breathe.
Now inhale,
With burning eyes,
Look away.
Don't stare too long.
The sight,
so awful.
Mutalted and disfigured.
Blinded by the past.
Confuzed,
No naive.
The pain,
And the tingle.
The pain,
And the burn.
Memories,
Flood back.
Open water,
Has danger.
So Step up.
Don't fall back.
Straight up.
Don't back off.
Live strong,
Don't breathe.
Deep inhale,
With burning eyes,
Look him straight in the eyes,
And say "no".

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very powerful, excellently written. I admire the uniqueness of this piece. It has very interesting flow and topic. Effective from the beginning to the end, very descriptive with good choice of words.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww man. Did you reject someone in this poem? Dang that's messed up. lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this, it was quite interesting. The word choice seemed to be strong and powerful holding deep emotions which you portrayed nicely. The structure was interesting and the flow was nice. Well done with this~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. The flow was better in this one. I gave it a 5/5.

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