I liked it. The flow was better in this one. I gave it a 5/5.

I liked this, it was quite interesting. The word choice seemed to be strong and powerful holding deep emotions which you portrayed nicely. The structure was interesting and the flow was nice. Well done with this~mel

Aww man. Did you reject someone in this poem? Dang that's messed up. lol.

Very powerful, excellently written. I admire the uniqueness of this piece. It has very interesting flow and topic. Effective from the beginning to the end, very descriptive with good choice of words.
Keep up!
5/5 from me