I think everyone is committed somehow, even if in their own minds. Great write. Awesome flow, and the message, well it is defianlty one that most people wouldn't understand. I don't know what else I can say, except these written words of your bring joy to my dark side, and they even bring a smile out from my tears. 5/5

I loved this one very much because it was very different.
I agree with vanessa, that the message is one that most might not understand.
Well done
love Tara-Kay
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