by carissalynn May 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Happiness is all i want |
by Sasha
This is a really nice poem you have a lot of talent |
I guess we all go through this stage though i am not trying to compare situations here. I liked the way you write this one. The flow and rhythm was not in place and this is how things are written from heart a sthey follow no rule and thats what i liked the best in this. |