by BeautifulxMess May 3, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
No body listens to the cries of a young girl hurt. |
Personally i thought this was a very good poem. such a good flow to it. good rhythem and great use of emotions. It shows that this came straight from ur heart. Nice job |
by Chrissie
I agree, it wasnt your best, but it was still EXCELLENT!! Well done. It had so much emotion and detail. Awesome work. Keep it up ^_^ |