Cold and Heartless

by XxMoonLightxX   May 3, 2007


Just another day
As I silently walk past you,
Wanting nothing but for you to say,
You still love me too

It is like I am standing in the rain
Out in the middle of no where
Trying to get rid of the pain
And no one even cares

I will always miss everything we use to have
I will always remember how it use to be
Just know I would die to hear you laugh
Even if it kills me

It is so hard to say good bye
And just turn and walk away from it all
When all I ever do is cry
Because you never even cared enough to call

So I sit all alone
In my corner of darkness
Of course I am again totally on my own
Left here cold and heartless

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Once again, watch that forced rhyming. Keep in mind also that you want to have proper grammar and spelling, punctuation also. It not only makes your poem have more structure, it helps the flow. Keep up teh great work. Thank you for comments and rates on my poems. God Bless 5/5
    <3tay(^__^)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this is so sad, yet such a pleasure to read and so beautifully written.
    I adore the last stanza, it hit me hard, I found it to be very intense.
    I thought in certain stanzas there seemed to be quite a few fillers which disrupted the flow at times, but apart from that this was beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, very heavy poem, its very good. you are good at showing your motions xx well done xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    I understand and empathise with the feelings undermining this poem. (Sorry, I'm being lazy and I don't want to write any more lol.)
    5/5

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