by e LIZ a beth May 3, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Pretty girl, don't forget to smile, |
This poem is really good u put a lot of emotion into it~ which made it great! |
by Robert
This was a really well done poem the flow was good the stanza was nice and the message not only was refreshing but well done Great Job. Plot121 |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, |
Oh my gosh i am soooo jelous.. i love this poem.. but in this line "never let yourself fine out how." i think you meant to say find instead of fine and also i dont get that stanza.. it doesnt make sense.. and i think it would sound better if you used pretty girl in the begging of every other line instead of every fourth .. idk i like it like that hehe :D |