Oh my gosh i am soooo jelous.. i love this poem.. but in this line "never let yourself fine out how." i think you meant to say find instead of fine and also i dont get that stanza.. it doesnt make sense.. and i think it would sound better if you used pretty girl in the begging of every other line instead of every fourth .. idk i like it like that hehe :D

Wow,
this is a great poem that im adding to my favorite poems of P&Q cause, the meaning is just so great and beautiful.
i agree with the advises you have given. so true.
again a perfect poem with a 5/5 cause u really do deserve it.

This was a really well done poem the flow was good the stanza was nice and the message not only was refreshing but well done Great Job. Plot121

This poem is really good u put a lot of emotion into it~ which made it great!
Nice job you are very talented~!
5/5