That was also thought provoking. where did you learn to write like that. it is always a joy to read your words. I am not quite sure I got the entire meaning of that, but I will. You did another brillant job. excellent. Keep writting or I will cry. 5/5

This piece of poetry of yours was flawless. honestly i could not find one thing i did not enjoy about it. The meaning portrayed was amazing and written beautifully. Truely expressed well. Loved this alot~mel

Flawless, everything about this was awesome. It was so perfect, with rhyming and flow, the wording was brilliant.
you really have a talent that i could never aqquire.
Love and best wishes
Tara-Kay
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