What a such soft and beautiful write, you use your language very well as if it was limited and i feel that this particular poem this worked :d

xxx alex xxx

Most of the time when i comment, i try to leave a little critique...but i can't find anything that needs to be critiqued. your flow is perfect, rhyming perfect. all of your poems create a picture in my head that make it easier to understand and relate to. great job, keep writing!

I love this poem, the use of imagery is fantastic and the desciption is undeniably brilliant. a very good poem and an enjoyable read.