by Liz
Ok, I read the first one...Idk which one I like better, though. Lol. Very descriptive & detailed. I like the fact that it was happening in 'her' mind...creative. Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Jessica
This is really nice,,great job!!5/5 |
by Han84
Hey.. i just read the first one and i prefer the secolnd one... i dunno got a different feeling when read it lol |
by Robyn
This was hott good work keep it up |
Wow uhmmm its good =o] |
I luv dis poem itsthe bomb |