Comments : Sex you in your mind Pt. 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Ok, I read the first one...Idk which one I like better, though. Lol. Very descriptive & detailed. I like the fact that it was happening in 'her' mind...creative. Keep writing! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is really nice,,great job!!5/5
    Janaynay

  • 17 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey.. i just read the first one and i prefer the secolnd one... i dunno got a different feeling when read it lol

    but wicked writting be inrtesting what wood be going o in her mind lol

    5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    This was hott good work keep it up
    robyn xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow uhmmm its good =o]
    i like it + yur hott soooo makes a great poem
    lol
    ♥

  • 16 years ago

    by DALIVEST CHICK

    I luv dis poem itsthe bomb