:( thats really sweet...this line kinda hit home but yeah great write

As I got off the bus I felt the rain hitting me
I ran for cover but it was too late, I was soaked
There you were, waiting for me in the shelter
You smiled at me and I knew it made you happy
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I cant wait to read more

WOW! Its just like watching a movie/Film! I'm really speechless 5/5! Darien = Amazing

*I hope someone out there will heal my heart :(*

"I was wet, but you still hugged me tightly
Pushing me back into the rain you kissed me
It was the most magical feeling for us both
Holding your hands and kissing your lips
The rain poured down on us, but we didn't care

It was love, it was the feeling we longed for
Together in the rain, forever inseparable"
My favorite part.. anyway.. this is awsome.. i love it.. nice flow.. 5/5 this poem has a lot of emotion in in.. keep up the good work.

Great poem. It's sweet:) Keep up the great work. 5/5

Hey,
Well this poem was quite anjoyable. It had a good display of emotion and if i was asked to describe it in one word id say that it was really sweet. :)
Ok the title of the poem, seems kindof fary tail like. "Kissing You In The Rain", it just makes me think of the "and they lived hapily ever after story". You carried on this concopet throught your poem. The first stanza, instantly shows how much you care for this girl. The secound and third stanza, shows that you were thinking of her throughout the bus ride. Again showing your deep feelings. The fourth and fifth stanza, show her feelings towards you. And then the last stanza seems to sum up the entire poem. I really thought it was like a fairy tale. To improve i suggest you use punctuation, but other then that a great read! Really sweet. :) xx

Awwww! How Dainty haha. This was cute! and well written WOOT 5/5
Carissa [[=

I must say it was a good write, Although; I felt it was more of a story than anything else, it was in poem format, but lacked the flow that a poem usually has. Anyways, you are a great love writer, we deffenitly need to do another collab sometime. Keep up the great works.

Peace, Joe

Aww.. this poem is adorable.. an enjoyable read.. the title.. is very cliche and turned me away from the poem but when i read it i realized that it wasnt cliche at all.. you managed to use something as universally romantic like kissing in the rain without re-writing what has already been said and done thousands of times before.. the flow was off in places.. "I smiled to myself as I nodded" mabe im just reading it wrong but that seemed too short for the stanza.. but idk.. anyway the rest was excellent.. you desribed things around you well nad made things really vivid

I found this poem quite enjoyable to read. the story that was portrayed throughout the poem was interesting not one part bored me. It wasn't cliche at all which is great because I'm getting sick of reading the same poems over and over, or so it feels i am. The imagery was vivid your description was really beautiful. I found this to be really sweet. The structure was fooling at first when i saw how the lines were set out (longer in some places and shorter in others) i thought that the flow would become off because you might of lost the syllable count. but i was wrong the flow was amazing and this whole poem was definitly beautiful. Guess that teaches me "Never to judge a book by its cover" Well done with this definitly a 5/5 from me. ~mel

AWH. Darienn, that is soo sweet. I loveed it. The descriptions were great, the love really shone through, the flow was good and i just loved it. I hope it's true hunny, you deserve someone amazing. 5/5

Keep on writing these poems because ur gud at them

This was rlly good - is it a true story? seems really real, but at the same time like it could be totally imagined - same as, like, a really good, pretty realistic movie :)

HEY REALLY SWEET POEM! REALLY LOVED IT!

OMG how beautiful.. that was really sweet. I LOVED it.

Naww
how sweet..
great job!

Marissa

Hey this one is sweet and i enjoyed it very muchly:D
keep it up aye:D
tk care
bree

NAWWWWWWWW ! this was such a sweet poem it was brilliantly written. it was such a beautiful poem and i no that alot of people can relate
this is such a good write
x

I love it, every girls dream.. thanks for capturing it in such a amazing poem..

Sweet!

A real lovely poem full of emotion and love it was so good and well written xxx alex xxx